" Air Pollution "
1. Introduction- The importance of air in our life.
- The definition of air pollution.
- Car fumes.
- Pesticides
- The burning of rice straw.
- Wastes of factory.
- Freon of fridges and freezers.
- Some diseases like pneumonia.
- Some material like Arsenic and lead cause mental retardation.
- Enacting some laws to build industrial zones outside the crowded cities.
- Encouraging car drivers to use solar energy and natural gas instead of poisonous gases.
- Take procedures by Egyptian Ministry of Environment to fine factories that don't follow these precautionary sanctions.

So nice outline Manon. it will be comprehensive and meaningful essay in shaa Allah
ردحذفwhat fantastic! good luck manon
ردحذفan excellent outline. I liked it so much especially the picture you added to it. Take care Eman the title of this post should be "outline" not "first draft". The first draft is the essay itself that you have to write and send to the weblog under the title of "first draft(Pollution)".
ردحذفGo ahead and write your draft,Iam waiting it.
I want you to access the weblog of Elham and read the essay she wrote and try to give her comments and suggestions for improving her essay. If you need help in correcting Elham's essay, you can use the editing checklist I added to the class weblog.